Ashley Domenic Augustine

The text of this has been deleted. Number one, the lounge is not the place for this. Number two, don't use caps. Number three, try spelling. - Nate

Just so you know, you don't need to refer to Jaden as 'the boy with the bronze sword'. Just call him Jaden, and just call the eight year old Ben. ...

Is this your first story? Cos dang!!! Why are you killing a baby? Why is it described so much on killing it? My lil sis was reading this and she ...

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I am willing to take any type of criticism GOOD OR BAD thank you for reading.

“Daddy, why do you have to go?” The child used his gloved hand to wipe his runny nose. Frosty air brushed against him, leaving specks of snow on his winter ...

Good story but not my kind of story. 1. Too much description. If you have less, you will stand more of a chance of gripping the reader to your story ...

Dynamo, This was quite a good piece of work you done. It was slow at first but eventually it moved on and became quite a fun read! :D What is ...

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Anybody interested please be free to visit my site. Thankyou! :D Anybody interested please be free to visit my site. Thankyou! :D Please note that I am opened to all ...

Did you make the website? If so, you've got some serious web-design potential. I wish I was that good when I was thirteen. That being said, there are some things ...

Wow congratulations on publishing a book. You really gave me hope that maybe I could publish a book one day. The cover of your book is pretty cool and its ...

I wonder if the black figure on the black throne with red eyes will turn out to be the bad guy? Or maybe the raven-haired guy with the black armor ...

It must be cool to be published, but yeah, I did notice a few little mistakes, I trust this isn't your finished copy. Doesn't the sample belong in one of ...

Attention all Fantasy, Sci Fi and Horror Lovers. I have just published my first book via Author USA at just 13(The Patokafus Trilogy -Book1 the Goldstone). Details of my journey ...